Haiku I wrote for school.
Spring comes after snow
Little rivers everywhere
Sometimes I get soaked
Some are old, some new
I climb almost every kind
Except for pines. Ouch
The ice-age was cold
No life could live in this age
It was very...Cool.
By Meadow.
(I was kind of lacking in that last one)
Little rivers everywhere
Sometimes I get soaked
Some are old, some new
I climb almost every kind
Except for pines. Ouch
The ice-age was cold
No life could live in this age
It was very...Cool.
By Meadow.
(I was kind of lacking in that last one)
posted by meadow @ 3/15/2007
2 Comments:
At 12:25 PM,
Paula said…
I love the tree haiku the best, because you leave the subject unstated, just like a good Japanese samurai would do.p
At 12:50 PM,
Spoke said…
"Little rivers" is great descriptive writing. I see them rushing along quickly, even though they are small.
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